英文文章里面审稿人的审稿意见如下:AclearillustrationoftheVELOscalewillneedtobeaddedintothepaperandcontrastedwiththeauthor'smodifiedinstrument.
不太明白审稿人的意思，望各位大神求解，谢谢谢谢
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英文审稿意见求助
审稿意见回复信英文模板和语料总结
模板1.
Dearprof.XXanddearreviewers
Re:ManuscriptID:XXXXXandTitle:XXXXXX
Thankyouforyourletterandthereviewers’commentsconcerningourmanuscriptentitled“XXXXXX”(ID).Thosecommentsarevaluableandveryhelpful.Wehavereadthroughcommentscarefullyandhavemadecorrections.Basedontheinstructionsprovidedinyourletter,weuploadedthefileoftherevisedmanuscript.Revisionsinthetextareshownusingredhighlightforadditions,andstrikethroughfontfordeletions.Theresponsestothereviewer'scommentsaremarkedinredandpresentedfollowing.
Wewouldlovetothankyouforallowingustoresubmitarevisedcopyofthemanuscriptandwehighlyappreciateyourtimeandconsideration.
Sincerely.
XXXXX.
Reviewer#1:
Q1.Interpretationcouldbedeepenedregardingxx.关于xx的讨论应该更深入一些.
Response：Wearegratefulforthesuggestion.Tobemoreclearlyandinaccordancewiththereviewerconcerns,wehaveaddedamoredetailedinterpretationregardingxxx.Moredetailedstatisticalanalysiswasaddedonpage…
Q2.theEnglishlanguageneedstoberevisedforclarity…
Response：Weapologizeforthelanguageproblemsintheoriginalmanuscript.ThelanguagepresentationwasimprovedwithassistancefromanativeEnglishspeakerwithappropriateresearchbackground.
Q3.Page10,thelastsentenceofthefirstchaptershouldread:...,
Response：Weagreewiththecommentandre-wrotethesentenceintherevisedmanuscriptasthefollowing:….
Q4.Pleaseprovidedetailsofresults,andpleaseanalyzeanddiscussit.
Response：Wearegratefulforthesuggestion.Assuggestedbythereviewer,wehaveaddedmoredetailsof…
其他语料：
1.Thankyouforyoursuggestion.Assuggestedbyreviewer,wehaveaddedthesuggestedcontenttothemanuscriptonpage…
2.Thankyouforyourcomments,thediscussionregardingthisquestionispresentedfollowing:…
3.Wedeeplyappreciatethereviewer’ssuggestion.Accordingtothereviewer’scomment,wehaveaddedamoredetailedinterpretationregarding…
4.Thankyouforyourcomment,andourreplyisasfollows:…
5.Response:Wedeeplyappreciatethereviewer’ssuggestion.Accordingtothereviewer’scomment,wehaveprovidedmoredetailstodescribethepossiblereasons.
6.Weareextremelygratefultoreviewerforpointingoutthisproblem.Wehave…
7.Wearegratefulforthesuggestion.Tobemoreclearandinaccordancewiththereviewerconcerns,wehaveaddedabriefdescriptionasfollows:
8.Wehavemodifiedthisexpressionthroughoutthetextaccordingtothecomment.
9.Thankyouforthesuggestion.Wehaveaddedtheinformationrequiredasexplainedabove(Lines6-28,page6)
10.Thankyouforunderliningthisdeficiency.Thissectionwasrevisedandmodifiedaccordingtotheinformationshowedintheworksuggestedbythereviewer(Line41,page3).
11.Thankyouforthesuggestion.Wehaveaddedtheinformationrequiredasexplainedabove(Lines6-28,page6).
12.Modifiedthroughoutthetextaccordingtothecomment(Line20,page1).Thankyouforthetitlesuggested.Theprecedentversionofthetitlehasbeenreplaced,becoming...
13.Weappreciatethereviewer’spositiveevaluationofourwork.
14.Ourdeepestgratitudegoestoyouforyourcarefulworkandthoughtfulsuggestionsthathavehelpedimprovethispapersubstantially.
15.WehavecarefullyrevisedthelanguageissueagainbasedonthelatestfileuploadedonOctober5th.Thisrevisionishighlightedingreen(foradding)andstrikethroughfont(fordeleting)inthetext.Atthesametime,wehaveuploadedthefileoftherevisedmanuscriptandflowchartfile.
16.Thankyouforyourpreciouscommentsandadvice.Thosecommentsareallvaluableandveryhelpfulforrevisingandimprovingourpaper.Wehaverevisedthemanuscriptaccordingly，andourpoint-by-pointresponsesarepresentedabove.
17.Weappreciatethereviewer’spositiveevaluationofourworkandagreewiththecommentsregardingthelimitationsofourstudy.
模板2.来自公众号《大葱的后花园》
DearEditors(或编辑的具体姓名Prof.xxx)andreviewers:
Thankyouforyourpreciouscommentsandadvice.Thosecommentsareallvaluableandveryhelpfulforrevisingandimprovingourpaper,aswellastheimportantguidingsignificancetoourresearches.Wehavestudiedcommentscarefullyandhavemadecorrectionwhichwehopemeetwithapproval.Revisedportionaremarkedinredinthepaper.Themaincorrectionsinthepaperandtherespondstothereviewer’scommentsareasflowing:
Responsetothereviewer'scomments:
Reviewer#1:
1.一般第一段是reviewer对你文章的总结。
Thankyouforyoursummary.Wereallyappreciateyoureffortsinreviewingourmanuscript.Wehaverevisedthemanuscriptaccordingly.Ourpoint-by-pointresponsesaredetailedbelow.
2.你的语言很差，通篇很多语法错误:Thereviewersarequiteunanimousinthat,thisisanimportantpieceofworkwithalargenumberofpatients.However,theEnglishgrammaticalerrorsdetractfromthequalityofthepaperandmakesitdifficulttoread.
Thankyouforyourcarefulreview.Weareverysorryforthemistakesinthismanuscriptandinconveniencetheycausedinyourreading.ThemanuscripthasbeenthoroughlyrevisedandrewrittenbyanativeEnglishspeaker(或者杂志推荐的润色公司如Americanjournalexpert),sowehopeitcanmeetthejournal’sstandard.
3.你的文章没有新意，你说的大家都知道：Theresultsarenotnovel.
Thankyouforyourcarefulreview.WebelievethatmostspecialistsinXXXknowsthatXXX.详细的介绍你的创新性，最好加几篇参考文献。Despitetheconclusionsarethesameaswethought,weprovidethebasisforcommonsense.
4.你的文章没有XXX数据，Oneofthemajorweakpointsofthisarticleisthatthereisnocomparativedata……
Thankyouforyourcarefulreview.Werespectivelyscreenedxxxx.(1)：加数据，详细的加，重新做统计，不仅要放到Results，为了reviewer方便要放到回复下面。(2)加不了数据，详细的给reviewer写明为啥加不了数据。在discussion和limitation中加入你为什么加不了数据，因为没条件没研究经费XXX…
5.你没引用某个文献。Inthediscussionpartaboutthe,theauthorsarerecommendedtocitethefirstarticlesasbelow.
Thankyouforyourcarefulreview.ThesetwoimportantpiecesofresearchfoundthatXXX.Wecitedthesetwoarticlesinthediscussion.一定要加reviewer建议的文献，可能就是reviewer自己的文章，可以搜一下同一作者的文章，多引用几篇。
6.你的纳入标准写的啥，我都看不懂。Howmanypatientshadxxxxandhowmanyhadxxx
Thankyouforyourcarefulreview.Weapologizefornotdescribingtheinclusioncriteriaclearer.Wehavenowaddedflowdiagramofthestudyparticipants.(有时候你自己认为很清楚，大家觉得很乱，所以加个流程图就很明了了)
最后感谢下审稿人的付出，就OK了
Thankyouforyourcarefulreview.Wereallyappreciateyoureffortsinreviewingourmanuscriptduringthisunprecedentedandchallengingtime.Wewishgoodhealthtoyou,yourfamily,andcommunity.Yourcarefulreviewhashelpedtomakeourstudyclearerandmorecomprehensive.
模板3.
DearEditorsandReviewers,
Thanksverymuchfortakingyourtimetoreviewthismanuscript.Wereallyappreciateallyourgenerouscommentsandsuggestions！Pleasefindmyrevisionsinthere-submittedfiles.
Responsetothereviewer’scomments
Weareverygratefultoyourcommentsforthemanuscript.Accordingtoyouradvice,weamendedtherelevantpartinmanuscript.Allofyourquestionswereansweredonebyone.
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2…
3…
模板4.
DearEditor,Dearreviewers
ThankyouforyourletterdatedFebruary22.WewerepleasedtoknowthatourworkwasratedaspotentiallyacceptableforpublicationinJournal,subjecttoadequaterevision.Wethankthereviewersforthetimeandeffortthattheyhaveputintoreviewingthepreviousversionofthemanuscript.Theirsuggestionshaveenabledustoimproveourwork.Basedontheinstructionsprovidedinyourletter,weuploadedthefileoftherevisedmanuscript.Accordingly,wehaveuploadedacopyoftheoriginalmanuscriptwithallthechangeshighlightedbyusingthetrackchangesmodeinMSWord.Appendedtothisletterisourpoint-by-pointresponsetothecommentsraisedbythereviewers.Thecommentsarereproducedandourresponsesaregivendirectlyafterwardinadifferentcolor(red).Wewouldlikealsotothankyouforallowingustoresubmitarevisedcopyofthemanuscript.
WehopethattherevisedmanuscriptisacceptedforpublicationintheJournalofMountainScience.Sincerely,XXXX
模板5.（摘自丁香园的某位战友，但是抱歉，我忘记账号了）
DetailedResponsestoReviewer
Responsetoreviewer#1:
Themanuscriptandwritingareverysimilarthereviewbelow:****
Response:Weagreewithyourcomment.Theframedesignofthismanuscriptissimilarreallytoabovepublishedreview.However,theemphasesofthesetworeviewsaredistinct.
Inthepreviousreview,theauthorhasdiscussedhow*******includingParkinson’sdisease(PD),Alzheimer’sdisease(AD),andamyotrophiclateralsclerosis(ALS).Whereas,inthepresentmanuscript,wehavemainlyfocusedontheeffectshow*****8.
Inadditiontosome***discussedinthepreviousreview,wehavealsosummarizedmanyothertargetproteins,including**,***,****,**,**.Moreover,wehaveintroducedthelatestresearchfindingswhichwereevennotmentionedinthepreviousreview.Furthermore,intermsoftreatment,wehaveprovidedmoredetailsabouttarget***toaparticulartherapeuticaim.
Wethoughtourworkcouldattracttheresearcher’sattention,becausewehaveprovidedmorecomprehensiveanddetailedinformationabout*****.Forthisreason,wesubmittedthecurrentmanuscript.
Responsetoreviewer#2:
1.Thisisanexcellentreviewon***givingasystematicanddetailedpictureonthisimportantissue.
Response:Weappreciatethereviewer’spositiveevaluationofourwork.
2.Someminorpoints:Someabbreviationsareappearmorethanonetime(likeMAP),ormissing(PSD-95),ordonotappearthefirsttimementioned(VDAC).
Response:Weapologizeforthelanguageproblemsintheoriginalmanuscript.Followingthereviewer’ssuggestion,wehavedeletedtherepeatedabbreviations,like“MAP”,“Cdk-5”and“NMDA”,introducedthe“PSD-95”atitsfirstmentionandaddedthe“VDAC”afteritsfullname.LanguagepresentationwasimprovedwithassistancefromanativeEnglishspeakerwithappropriateresearchbackground.
3.Inpage72thparagraph:"****"sentencenotclear.
Response:Weagreewiththecommentandre-wrotethesentenceintherevisedmanuscriptasthefollowing:“*******.”
4.Inpage10,atbottom,that“*****”canitbeexplainedabitmore?
Response:Wedeeplyappreciatethereviewer’ssuggestion.Accordingtothereviewer’scomment,weprovidedmoredetailstodescribethismechanismasthefollowing:
“******.”
5.Sometypos.
Response:Weapologizeforthemistakesinthemanuscriptandalsocarefullycheckedtheentiremanuscriptfortypographic,grammaticalandformattingerrors.
想要延长稿件修改的最后期限邮件模板
Dearprof.xxx，
ThankyouverymuchforyourE-mailof"September5,2019"regardingourmanuscript"ID:xxxx".Sincerethanksalsogototheresponsibleandkindreviewersforhelpingusimproveourmanuscriptinbothscientificandlinguisticaspects.
AssoonasreceivingyourE-mail,alltheauthorsdiscussedthecommentsonebyonecarefully.Wetotallyagreewiththereviewersthatmajorandmoderaterevisionsneedtomakeinourmanuscript.Wealsofoundthatitwouldbedifficulttoaddresssomeissuesraisedbythereviewers.Forexample,weneedtosupplementthedataandredothestatisticalanalysis,whichtakesalongtime.Anotherdilemmaisthatwehaveappliedaprofessionalcopyeditingservicestosolvethelanguageproblemraisedbyreviewers,butwehavenotyetreceivedtherevisedmanuscript.
So,wedonotthinktherevisedmanuscriptwillbefinishedby"October5,2019".Weestimateitwilltakeaweeklongertopreparetherevisedmanuscriptandtheresponsetothecomments.
Wewouldbegratefulifyoucouldpostponethedeadlineon"October12,2019".
Thankyouonceagainforyourattentiontoourpaper.
BestRegards.
Yourssincerely,
XXXX.
以下中文版摘自公众号《浙大学报英文版》
如果审稿人认为你的论文创新性不强，那么你可以回复说：“谢谢你的意见。我们这篇论文的确没有‘震惊宇宙’，并且原稿的引言部分没有把新意、重要性写清楚；有鉴于此，我们已经加强了引言部分，把创新性强调出来。本文的创新性就在于……”
如果审稿人误解了你一句话的意思，那么你不应该在心中骂审稿人愚蠢，也不应在答辩信中费唇舌解释，而应该这样想——审稿人是读者的代表，既然审稿人读了文章，产生误解，那么其他读者读了这篇文章也会产生误解。于是，可以把涉及的句子重新变换一下，写得清楚一些，并在答辩信中写：“谢谢提醒。我们原本的写作的确会引起歧义，现在我们根据审稿人的意见修改如下……”
如果审稿人要你补充一个实验，那么你就得做这个实验。如果实验结果能说明问题，那么要把实验结果写到论文里去。如果实验结果不能说明问题，也要在答辩信中展示、分析数据，告诉审稿人已经做了要求的实验，但没有得到有价值的结果，原因是什么。甚至可以把这些数据放到“支撑信息”部分，让审稿人觉得作者并没有心虚。
如果审稿人要你补充一个实验，但你没有实验条件，或者不能在短时期内做出这个实验怎么办？有的作者回复说：“审稿人建议的这个实验不重要，和本文无关。”但其实，作者应该静下心来分析——审稿人要求补充这个实验，是要了解什么信息或者达到什么实验目的（比如知道样品的元素含量）？如果作者没有审稿人提及的那个实验仪器，那么用别的仪器能否得到这个信息？作者应该想法设法补充实验，满足审稿人的要求，让审稿人“无话可说”。
万一还是无法满足审稿人的要求，那么作者也应在答辩信中诚恳说出原因，并且在修改论文时有所行动。比如，审稿人问：“反应机理是什么？”你由于种种原因无法弄清反应机理，那么应该在论文的讨论或者结论部分加上：“本文的主要目的是开发新的催化剂，但反应机理不清楚。这些催化剂的后续催化应用和反应机理值得进一步研究。”
你对实验现象提出了一种解释，但审稿人提出另一种解释，怎么办？我们要懂一点科学哲学。对于一个现象，当然可能有几种解释，我们不能执拗地说别的解释一定是错的，而要用实验数据来说话。如果实验数据说明审稿人的解释是合理的（作者原先的解释也没错），那么可以在修改论文时把新的解释加上，并且说实验数据和这个解释吻合，但两个解释究竟哪个更合理，有待于进一步验证。而如果实验数据说明审稿人的解释不合理，那么在修改论文时，可以写：“对于以上数据还有另外一种解释……但我们的实验结果并不支撑这种解释。”这么做的“原理”就在于：审稿人代表读者来读你的稿子，如果你只是在答辩信中告诉审稿人他的解释不成立，而没有把相关内容写到论文里，那么读者读到你的论文，同样会产生困惑。
如果审稿人要你针对文中某一个论断引用几篇文献，但你发现审稿人指定的这几篇文献和这个论断无关，怎么办？人非完人，审稿人的心中也有“自我”，甚至会“自私”。他要你引用的几篇文献，有可能包含着他自己发表的论文。作者处理这样的事情就要讲究“艺术”——这些论文引用在这一段不贴切，那么能否贴切地引用在别的段落？如果找不到现成的段落，那么能否阅读了这几篇文献后，想出一两句贴切的句子，增补在论文的某处，并引用这几篇文献？如果实在找不到引用这几篇文献的地方，能否甄别出这些文献的作者，并搜索这些作者别的文献，把这些“替代文献”贴切地引用到你的论文中，并告诉审稿人在哪里进行了修改？
单纯想为方便大家而总结的语料，谢谢提供上述素材的慷慨大方的好人们
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